Monday, February 20, 2012

Is it good? please tell me?

hi i am writing a story here it is brief



well its of a guy Cody Evans who shifts to an new town then to his new school his new school trusty is being arrested for drugs scandal, so he goes to a new one where he makes four friends they enjoy the school rife play pranks, get wounds in short they enjoy the school life, they have a favourite bugger shop suddenly their principal leaves the school and a new one comes, they suspect the principal that he is doing something wrong,



They follow him and finds that he is dealing with drugs, they somehow again follow him through a secret tunnel to catch him red handed using a handicam and it is reviled that their favorite burger shop is an office for the dealers and their and their friend George who is the owner of the shop is also invoked in drugs, But they think they will be caught so they decide to tun form thier and tell the police, when they run they find that their new principal as well as George are working for CBI and have disguised themselves as the drugs dealers to catch their boss but hey are unable to find it, but then the gang remember that something might be recorded in the hanidicam so they show the video to George and new principal and catch the boss of the drug dealers. At last the gang becomes famous in newspapers and TVs, at last they go their home as their year is completed



how is the story please tell me can it be enjoyed???Is it good? please tell me?
No.Is it good? please tell me?
Nope!Is it good? please tell me?
very good i love it i enjoyed it very much you should be an author your very good at writting a story
Sorry, but no... You need some part in the story where the main characters are in serious danger, and them turning out to be "cbi" adds nothing to the story, it should just be taken out...

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